This is just being nip picky, but in the last scene with the picture, can you diffuse a little later. I noticed the diffusion starts at 2:39. Maybe we can start the diffusion at 2:41 instead so the audience can have a slightly longer time to clearly see the picture frame of the father. But other than the other stuff corey mentioned, everything else is good :)
As Steven pointed out and as I have stated three times prior to now, the shot with the German plane rolling and getting smaller as he heads towards the ground is the last shot in the plane sequence. So, to reiterate the LAST shot in the ENTIRE plane sequence is the shot that starts at :48 seconds.
1:48 propeller doesn't spin?
ReplyDeleteand we couldnt get rid of those shadows in the sky from the planes?
ReplyDeleteThis is just being nip picky, but in the last scene with the picture, can you diffuse a little later. I noticed the diffusion starts at 2:39. Maybe we can start the diffusion at 2:41 instead so the audience can have a slightly longer time to clearly see the picture frame of the father. But other than the other stuff corey mentioned, everything else is good :)
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ReplyDeleteSome parts are a little fast, and the 'going down' clip at :48 should go at 2:25 before the boy sets the planes down.
ReplyDeleteAs Steven pointed out and as I have stated three times prior to now, the shot with the German plane rolling and getting smaller as he heads towards the ground is the last shot in the plane sequence. So, to reiterate the LAST shot in the ENTIRE plane sequence is the shot that starts at :48 seconds.
ReplyDeletecool, cool, just yeah, that one scene with the plane going down, is in the wrong place....just as the previous have stated
ReplyDeleteAlso, the boy's voice is being drowned out I think by the music just a little.